Some people say the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal on public places. Other people say that this is not enough and other measures are needed. Discuss both views and give tour own opinion.
Smoking has become a controversial topic in the present, because of its negative impacts.
However
, some individuals think that people
can be discouraged by making smoking illegal in public areas, whereas
others believe it is not enough. In my opinion, extra measures should be taken to discourage smoking. This
essay is to discuss about
both views and personal Remove the preposition
apply
view
.
Fix the agreement mistake
views
To begin
with, smoking generates an increasing number of drawbacks to consumers and their surroundings. In other words
, smoking affects people
actively as well as
passively. In most countries smoking in public is prohibited to reduce passive effects to
Change preposition
on
non-smoking
Add an article
the non-smoking
community
, especially pregnant mothers, children and patients. For an instance, if someone Fix the agreement mistake
communities
caught
Add a missing verb
is caught
while
consuming a Correct word choice
apply
cigarette
in a public place in Australia, they will be arrested and charged with serious punishments. In fact, this
approach supports to reduce
the usage of Change the verb form
reducing
cigarette
in public.
Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
However
, it is insufficient as people
can smoke in their houses,private officers etc.In order reduce
Fix the infinitive
to reduce
this
usage there should be more actions such
as increase
in tax on cigarettes, Add an article
an increase
the increase
display
consequences of smoking on packages. In terms of taxes, the UK introduced Correct word choice
and display
large
Add an article
a large
tax
on tobacco products and Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
as a result
sales of these products dropped significantly. On the other hand
, publishing images on Add an article
a carton
the carton
carton
of Fix the agreement mistake
cartons
cigarette
Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
also
a good solution. Add a missing verb
is also
For example
, a famous university in Sri Lanka did a
research on advertising negative results of Remove the article
apply
cigarette
on its packagesFix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
,
and found out Remove the comma
apply
this
supported to drop sales
within Change preposition
in sales
couple
of months.
Change the article
a couple
To conclude
as responsible citizens we should take actions
to discourage Fix the agreement mistake
action
people
from smoking. This
cannot be done only by making laws for smoking in public places. Governments should take every possible measures
to mitigate Change to a singular noun
measure
this
problem immediately.Submitted by dmdeemanthakasun on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!