The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares how many
residents
and
Non-
residents
made a journey by car from 1996 to 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the average
number
of
journeys
for
residents
tended to decrease.
However
,
Non-
residents
choose cars to make a journey that experienced fluctuation during the time period, eventually, the
figures
for
Non-
residents
had a sour trend. Looking
further
,the average
number
of
journeys
for
residents
was the largest position from around 10000 in 1996 to 9500 in 1999. At the same time, the
number
of car
journeys
for Non-
residents
was half time than that of
residents
in 1996, after that, the
figures
for
Non-
residents
remained at a steady raise of roughly 8000 until 1999. From 2000 to 2002, because parking meters were introduced in the city centre, the
figures
for
residents
stepped into plummeted during
this
period, and they maintained at roughly 5000 per day.
By contrast
, it is obvious that the
number
of
journeys
for
Non-
residents
had an upward tendency, and reached 8000. Another reason was that Westgate street and park lane closed to traffic after 2002, which had an evident effect on streams of
journeys
for
Non-
residents
, making it decline to below 5000.
Additionally
,
due to
this
reason, the
figures
for
residents
further
decreased and kept at about 4000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, non-residents, number, journeys, figures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.

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