Traffic jams are a problem for individuals to use roads freely in major cities. What problems does it have for individuals? How individuals can reduce traffic?

It is observed that

traffic

congestion is

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issue for

people

to

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roads

in many cities. From my point of view, there are reasons contributing to

this

phenomenon.

However

, there are

solutions

to

this

incident which I will discuss in

this

essay.

To begin

with, there are two main problems

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to

this

topic. The first bad thing about

traffic

jam is that it increases the level of

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stress

.

In other words

,

people

who drive their cars might be very angry and depressed

into

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the

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heavy

traffic

.

The

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problem is that it causes

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lots of money.

This

is because, If a city has a great deal of

traffic

congestion, there will become many

traffic

accidents, so

people

loose

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their money

to

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repairs.

For example

, Istanbul is a

cosmopolit

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city, in

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, almost every

roads

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full

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of

vehicles

during the

cummuting

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commuting

computing

time.

As a result

of

this

situation, most

of

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people

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the people

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in living big cities, can not drive easily and live

healthy

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.

Nevertheless

, there are two

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possible

solutions

which we could mention. The first solution

about

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this

problem is that

,

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governments should expand ways to drive safely.

In other words

, If the

roads

could be expanded,

people

will use their cars easily. In

adddition

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addition

to

this

, local administrators ought to limit

for

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long and heavy

vehicles

such

as lorries and tanks. Because these

type

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types

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of

vehicles

lead to

traffic

jams.

For example

, In Canada, a great

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amount

of

roads

were expanded for private cars and obligated for heavy

vehicles

, so

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is so satisfied.

Therefore

, I strongly believe that

,

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it is reasonable

solutions

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and should have applied. In conclusion, even though heavy

traffic

causes some problems for drivers

such

as increasing the level of stress and

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money,

In addition

to these issues, the

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suggested

possible

solutions

which are expanding ways and limiting

to

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use could be useful. If we do not apply these remedies, it will be harmful consequences for society.