Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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some
people
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that advertisements have a significant impact on our tendency for purchasing various types of goods in our daily lives.
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, others deny the power of
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advertisement
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since we are used to them which it can cause ignorance.
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, it may be true that advertisements may not attract many
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believe they are crucial for the current market.
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, compared to the
last
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decades, the role of
advertisement
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became quite comprehensive
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access to the internet.It is undeniable that introducing products through social media is an essential part of the business
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developing their quality of them.For
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,
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fashion well-known brands
such
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as GUCCI or ADDIDASS are already known worldwide,they invest to present their commodities by famous actors or actresses or sports champions to conserve their popularity and following that pursuing
people
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to buy their new products.
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, the creation of new careers namely influencers through
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social networks is an example of the vital role of
advertisement
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in our current world.
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the majority of the population
believe
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the
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importance of representing commodities,exploding societies by vast types of
advertisement
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in our neighbourhood and
an
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online social media especially after involving the internet in our lives,
advertisement
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formed
as
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a disturbance object to some extent,
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many
people
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try to ignore them.
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, a full inbox of commercial messages may hind
people
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to pay attention to them.
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, some exaggerated or false information
while
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presenting goods for the purpose of fooling the public's mind cause lake of confidence in producers or sellers in communities. Namely, online shops are presenting
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high-quality good to temp followers
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the buyer may not get the same of it.
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,
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it is believed by some
people
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that advertising goods via associated tools
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are
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essential to temp
people
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for shopping, others disagree.
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feel that both ideas are correct to some extent and l partially think advertisements are still vital tools for catching
people
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's eyes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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