Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is argued some
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by
people
that advertisements have a significant impact on our tendency for purchasing various types of goods in our daily lives.In contrast
, others deny the power of advertisement
since we are used to them which it can cause ignorance. Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
However
, it may be true that advertisements may not attract many people
, l
believe they are crucial for the current market.
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To begin
, compared to the last
decades, the role of advertisement
became quite comprehensive due to
access to the internet.It is undeniable that introducing products through social media is an essential part of the business along with
developing their quality of them.For instant
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although
fashion well-known brands such
as GUCCI or ADDIDASS are already known worldwide,they invest to present their commodities by famous actors or actresses or sports champions to conserve their popularity and following that pursuing people
to buy their new products.Furthermore
, the creation of new careers namely influencers through the
social networks is an example of the vital role of Correct article usage
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advertisement
in our current world.
While
the majority of the population believe
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believes
the
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advertisement
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thus
many people
try to ignore them.For example
, a full inbox of commercial messages may hind people
to pay attention to them. Moreover
, some exaggerated or false information while
presenting goods for the purpose of fooling the public's mind cause lake of confidence in producers or sellers in communities. Namely, online shops are presenting a
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while
the buyer may not get the same of it.
To conclude
, although
it is believed by some people
that advertising goods via associated tools is
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people
for shopping, others disagree.l
feel that both ideas are correct to some extent and l partially think advertisements are still vital tools for catching Add the punctuation
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