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Write an essay on the advantages and dis advantages of small and large families.

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Nowadays, the population of
people
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 increases in the world. Many
people
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,
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 believe that when they bring so many children it is good for the family.
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, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do
this
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. In
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 essay, I will discuss the positives and negatives of big and small
families
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 and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let's begin by looking at the advantages of big
families
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. One of the main positives is that when you have a large number of uncles or aunts you will have more cousins. What I mean by
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 is that when you have to go to the house of your grandfather or mother you can some
people
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 that in your age.
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, you can play with them.
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, you can go outdoors with them if you have some problem they came beside you.
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 can make feel that you have a backbone that you can trust on them.
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, we are going to talk about small
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 the most advantage is that when have to celebrate you will not have to be tired because there are only a few
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 that you will invite them.
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, if you want to bring gifts you will not lose so much money. Turning the other side of the argument is that if all the
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 do not want to bring more children the population will decrease a
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.
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, If you have big
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 some parents do not have a
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 of money but if they bring a
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 of kids the percentage of
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 who will get homeless will get high.
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this
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 essay there are a
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 of positives and negatives that I did not mention . Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of the big family are more comfortable and we get more fun.
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, if you get in trouble all the family come with you even if you need money.
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