Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicle, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In many people's

mind

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improving

road

security is the best way to decrease the maximum speed limits on

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vehicle

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;

however

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I believe that there are certain ways which are better though there are some advantages and drawbacks in between. In my point of view, I think it will not solve the problems of passengers' security by setting the inhibition of the speed limitation on

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.

For instance

, in Brussels Belgium,

firstly

, the government set the rule that every car should not run over 30

kilometers

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per hour in the centre.

Secondly

, the

roads

in the

center

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places become a single line in recent years.

However

, those rules do not make improve

road

safer,

in contrast

, it makes the

roads

more dangerous because every car wants to pass by quickly and it makes the

drivers

not pay attention to the passengers or trotline

drivers

. On the hand, I believe that improving the environment of shipping or making the resident more understand how to utilise the public bike systems will help the whole society because when people get familiar with using public transport, it will drop the usage of personal

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users, which will make the

road

become safer because the numbers of vehicles will decrease.

On the other hand

, the government can

also

raise the price of the fine, if the

drivers

over speed, they will get a huge fine.

In addition

, if the

drivers

do not pay the fine, their

driver

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licenses will be unveiled.

Therefore

, some facts

such

as a roundabout , bicycle

roads

and passways are difficult to keep as safe as

roads

with traffic lights.

However

, the rules of transportation can inhibit those chances to reduce

the

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accidents

happen

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. In conclusion, I understand that reducing the maximum speed limits of

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is the easiest way for keeping the

road

safe;

however

, I believe there are more advantages to

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the public transportation and bike systems which not only make the environment friendly but

also

improve the security of

road

users.