The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050
the graph shows the percentage of 4 different
age
groups
in the total population of New Zealand from 1950 tp
2050 .
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to
overall
, while
the percentage of people from 25 to 37 is predicted to be on the decrease , the opposite was seen in other groups
in 1950 , over 60 % of new zealand ‘s
population were aged 60 or older , being the predominant Change the capitalization
Zealand's
age
group, while
the percentages of those aged 25-37 and 38-45 were similar , the people living in new zealand were 14 yeas
old or younger is only 5% . the next 50 years, the most senior Correct your spelling
years
age
group still remind as the lagerst
group , there were more 38to 45 years Correct your spelling
largest
olds
with Correct your spelling
old
the
figure of 40% . meanwhile , the data of Correct article usage
a
two
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the two
youggest
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biggest
groups
were equal at one tenth
.
by 2050 , estimations Add a hyphen
one-tenth
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reveal
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that there Correct your spelling
reveal
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will
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be fewer people aged over 65 years old , at roughly 55% , Correct your spelling
will
while
the data of
those from 38 to 45 is expected to Change preposition
for
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remain
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unchanged , Correct your spelling
remain
while
it is forecasted that there will be almost no one in the 25-37 age
groups
, drastic increase to a fifth is foreseen in the proportion of those aged 14 or youngerSubmitted by hoailinhvu0504 on
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