Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development? Write at least 250 words. Please try to write at least 250 words.

These days an increasing number of
people
are selecting socialized application services,
such
as WeChat, TikTok and Facebook, to meet
further
communicative chats and instant messages.
Thus
, a person would chat and make a video call
in stead
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of meeting his family or friends offline.
This
case is twofold. I would list its benefits and drawbacks
,
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and output my analysis later.
Firstly
, rapidly developed social media has brought
the
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humanity different online
life styles
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lifestyles
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,
such
as e-commerce, chatting, dating, training, and so on. Those social issues which were done by meeting face-to-face previously
,
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can be solved fast and effectively through the applications, not only on
website
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the website
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but
also
on
mobile
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a mobile
the mobile
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phone
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phones
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. Young
pepople
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people
who
work
at
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in
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outskirts
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the outskirts
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area can just make a video call to
his
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family
in
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downtown directly. And,
for example
, in the
past
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a person has to go to
shopping
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the shopping
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mall to buy a pair of shoes
by
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taking a half day, but nowadays, he just
need
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to place an order for the deal in a few minutes. Apparently, advanced technologies
is
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pushing
the
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society's development and
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people
's horizon.
On the other hand
,
along with
the pace of boosting
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, many young
people
have to
work
out of their hometowns, or even in other countries.
Thus
,
an
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usual conversation facing each other in the past is difficult to achieve
in
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these days. They have to utilize a series of socialized software to chat and talk
instead
.
For example
,
a
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employee whose position is in a giant internet company has to
work
from 9am to 9pm every day, and
also
continue
work
on Saturdays.
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work
mechanism in society. The realistic situation, to some extent, is seriously resisting face-to-face communication in
community
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the community
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though
the
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human knows the benefits of it. In conclusion,
people
who live in contemporary society have to face the challenges of lacking direct meet each other
while
they contact and communicate
by
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social media.
This
batch of innovative technologies would offer a series of impacts
to
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traditional conversations, and it would
also
supply
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, fresh and advanced approaches to enhance communication for
the
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humanity. There
is
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no
doubts
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doubt
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that
future
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is just taking the future indeed.
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