Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development? Write at least 250 words. Please try to write at least 250 words.
These days an increasing number of
people
are selecting socialized application services, such
as WeChat, TikTok and Facebook, to meet further
communicative chats and instant messages. Thus
, a person would chat and make a video call in stead
of meeting his family or friends offline. Correct your spelling
instead
This
case is twofold. I would list its benefits and drawbacks,
and output my analysis later.
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Firstly
, rapidly developed social media has brought the
humanity different online Correct article usage
apply
life styles
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lifestyles
such
as e-commerce, chatting, dating, training, and so on. Those social issues which were done by meeting face-to-face previously,
can be solved fast and effectively through the applications, not only on Remove the comma
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website
but Add an article
the website
also
on mobile
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a mobile
the mobile
phone
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phones
pepople
who Correct your spelling
people
work
at
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in
outskirts
area can just make a video call to Correct article usage
the outskirts
his
family Correct pronoun usage
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for example
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a person has to go to Add a comma
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shopping
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the shopping
a shopping
by
taking a half day, but nowadays, he just Change preposition
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need
to place an order for the deal in a few minutes. Apparently, advanced technologies Change the verb form
needs
is
pushing Change the verb form
are
the
society's development and Correct article usage
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widening
people
's horizon.
On the other hand
, along with
the pace of boosting economy
, many young Correct article usage
the economy
people
have to work
out of their hometowns, or even in other countries. Thus
, an
usual conversation facing each other in the past is difficult to achieve Change the article
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these days. They have to utilize a series of socialized software to chat and talk Change preposition
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instead
. For example
, a
employee whose position is in a giant internet company has to Change the article
an
work
from 9am to 9pm every day, and also
continue work
on Saturdays. That is
so-called
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the so-called
work
mechanism in society. The realistic situation, to some extent, is seriously resisting face-to-face communication in community
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the community
a community
the
human knows the benefits of it.
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people
who live in contemporary society have to face the challenges of lacking direct meet each other while
they contact and communicate by
social media. Change preposition
through
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batch of innovative technologies would offer a series of impacts to
traditional conversations, and it would Change preposition
on
also
supply brand new
, fresh and advanced approaches to enhance communication for Add a hyphen
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the future
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