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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that
children
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 mostly are expected to obey different
rules
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 either at home or school. Strictness is important sometimes but it might have serious consequences for them.
This
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 issue will be examined in the following essay. Some people
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support
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imposing
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 because
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 can hold
children
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 accountable for their behaviour and help them develop good behaviour patterns from a young age. Unlikely adults,
children
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 are normally not interested that them do bad something in society, and setting
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 can make them realise how to behave in a societally acceptable way.
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, they can learn how to greet suitable, and manners of eating when outside house.
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, they will receive admiration from parents and teachers,
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 as if
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 don’t chat or interrupt between teaching, a teacher will admire them and may
givethem
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give them
a snack as a reward.
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, argue that
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 can limit the improvement of solve-problem skills if those parents prove these strict
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 give privilege to
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’s obedience.
Children
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 will accept that strict
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 are important to follow, but
some time
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 may be unable to solve problems by themselves.
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, some
children
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 were taught to do something carefully, until they must work
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 there is a time limit causing an inability to manage time as an assignment.
Children
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 who obey
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 may be bullied and abused by other friends at school because they are given attention by the teacher. In conclusion, determining
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 for
children
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 it’s essential to themselves and their parents, but enforcing
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rules
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 on
children
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 affects more to them
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 as they will be against them and have worse behaviour.
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, in my opinion should use
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 for
children
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 sometimes as necessary in order to they can solve problems dependently.
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