Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People can't live without buying
products
, not like in the past where
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their
requirments
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requirements
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himself's
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advertisement
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to show the customers what is the product and how it can Correct your spelling
raised
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. In my opinion, recently marketing has become Change the verb form
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huge industry and it is necessary for all Add an article
a very
companies
. In this
essay
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adverise
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advertise
the
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apply
products
and I will discuss the other thought
believing that marketing is no longer Correct subject-verb agreement
thoughts
important
thing to do.
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an important
the important
companies
produces
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produce
same
item, Change the article
the same
this
is because the
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of the
unexperienced
population in the world and the prevalence of technology, they can reach Correct your spelling
inexperienced
to
the customers easily through Change preposition
apply
internet
. Add an article
the internet
However
, many well known
brands do not need to advertise their Add a hyphen
well-known
products
because they are already familiar to the communties
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communities
for example
, in fast
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the fast
industries
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industry
Maccdonald's
if it is found anywhere in the world you must find dozens of Correct your spelling
McDonald's
peoples's
buying from it. Remove the s
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Nevertheless
fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
resturants
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restaurants
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is
not known by any person will Correct subject-verb agreement
are
surly
need to market their Correct your spelling
surely
products
in order to be familiar by
others so they can try Change preposition
with
it
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them
Advertisment
is comprising a huge part of the Correct your spelling
Advertisement
companies
and most of the budget is provided for the
marketing. Some of them are paying attention to it more than the product Correct article usage
apply
it self
. As you Correct your spelling
itself
be come
more known to the customer they will have the Correct your spelling
become
encouragment
to try what you Correct your spelling
encouragement
offers
.
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offer
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hand
there is Add a comma
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idea
that said Add an article
the idea
an idea
advertisment
is becoming very boring as sometimes we are forced to see it. Correct your spelling
advertisement
advertising
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on youtube suddenly Correct article usage
a video
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an advertisment
advertisment
might arise and Correct your spelling
advertisement
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him from watching, Correct your spelling
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this
is extremely
bothering way of marketing. Correct article usage
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methods
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bring
watchers
attention Change noun form
watchers'
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as, if person
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the person
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searching
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for
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him directly to visit the website of the company that want to Replace the word
advise
sale
the product. Replace the word
sell
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way you will be aimed to
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at
to by
what you want to offer.
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in
To conclude
, some people want to buy the thing but they doesn't
know where to find it and Change the verb form
don't
good
way to overcome Add an article
a good
this
issue is by making this
thing well known by costumers
. Correct your spelling
customers
The people
may hate what are Correct article usage
People
companies
doing to spread their items. However
, to build big
brand I think there Add an article
a big
the big
is
new smart ways to Change the verb form
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atrract
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attract
human's
attention without getting bored.Change noun form
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