The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, we consume more unhealthy food than ever before in

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history.

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, the percentage of overweighted humans

continue

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growing

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. Many

peole

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people

argue that the best way to deal with it is to add more

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lessons

while

we are at

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school. Personally, I agree that more

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would benefit students,

however

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it could be not enough. In any

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sports

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consistency is very important and by introducing more obligatory

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lessons

we would increase it. Nowadays, children do not do exercises by themselves, so some intensive sports 2-3

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a

week

would be very helpful for teenagers.

For instance

, a friend of mine who had serious

weight

issues started to play basketball 3 times a

week

for 1 hour per session and after 3 months only he began looking very fit.

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, as I mentioned before,

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sport

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routine could be not enough. If a child trains 3 times a

week

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but consumes

fastfood

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fast food

fast-food

on a daily basis, he will not

loose

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the

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weight

. Diet experts maintain that nutrition is extremely crucial in

weight

losses

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, maybe even more important than

trainings

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training

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. So, if we want to care about children’s

weight

, we

shoud undrestand

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should understand

the importance of healthy food and try to share

this

information with teenagers at school. In conclusion, I can assume that a consistent sport routine and a good diet are both needed to help children with their

weight

. What I suggest is that we should introduce more

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lessons

in our schools,

however

, teachers and trainers need to focus more on

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nutrition. If children ate

less

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hamburgers and sweets and did some sports 2-3 times a

week

, they would be not

overweighted

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and healthy.