Littering in cities is an increasing problem which needs to be dealt with. Some people think that steeper fines is the best way to deal with the problem. To what extent do you agree?

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year, the world has seen an unprecedented

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littering among many

cities

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is not only unsightly but

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harmful to the environment and detrimental effect

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people

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’s health. Many

people

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claim that the best

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to handle

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issue is to

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fines

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trend, there are other solutions that should be considered.

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with, littering in

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is a growing problem that needs to be addressed. First and foremost, having bigger

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can be one effective

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to tackle the problem of littering.

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, if governing bodies

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the number of penalties it would be better for

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to take the more seriously.

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, nowadays, many cosmopolitan

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have started to

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the penalties day by day for littering

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local

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is because by improving the considerable

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, individuals will think twice before doing it. Having said that, it is important to remember

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alone may not be enough to solve the issue. There are myriad solutions for that trend. One of which the primary reason is governing bodies have to create education and awareness campaigns are

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need to help

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understand why it is exceptionally important to keep

cities

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clean. By the

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, they will know littering

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adversely

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effects

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not only their health but

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our environment.

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, these days the vast majority of

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are suffering from

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range of health problems ranging from infections in the airways, heart disease and so on which comes down to

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littering.

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,

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government should

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consider providing more public trash cans and recycling bins in

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is because it would make

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easier and more convenient for locals to dispose of their waste properly and reduce the amount of littering. In conclusion, even though imposing

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high

fines

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is one

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of controlling littering, it is not the only

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providing greater access to rubbish cans, and trash cans and creating awareness purposes

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also

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the best option would obviously improve the issue of littering in big

cities

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