An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • say how you feel about the visit? • suggest what you could do on his/her birthday? • ask what your friend thinks of your idea? Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear….

#australian #friend #visit #birthday #idea #addresses #dear…

Dear Rony, I hope

this

email finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am pleased to hear that you will visit

Bangladesh

next month with family members, and your 30th

birthday

will be celebrated during

this

trip.

To begin

with, I feel

honored

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honoured

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about your upcoming visit as

this

is the first time you will visit

Bangladesh

. I firmly believe that you will enjoy

this

trip as

Bangladesh

is a very beautiful country

as well as

people are very friendly. I will suggest some ideas to make your

birthday

memorable

such

as having traditional food and enjoying the cultural program at the Peninsula Hotel in Chittagong.

This

hotel's

overall

atmosphere is very suitable for celebrating the

birthday

program.

Moreover

, you could try "Hilsha Fish with Brinjal Fry" which is their signature food item.

However

, you would like all the ideas suggested above for celebrating your

birthday

. Apart from that, if there are any ideas from your side, please let me know so that we can make your

birthday

program enjoyable here in

Bangladesh

. I am looking forward to your kind reply regarding

this

matter. Yours lovingly, Faisal

Submitted by faisalmahamood on Thu Nov 30 2023

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coherence cohesion

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single idea per paragraph

Maintain a single idea per paragraph for clarity and focus.

task achievement

Address all parts of the task adequately, with sufficient detail.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

191 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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