An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • say how you feel about the visit? • suggest what you could do on his/her birthday? • ask what your friend thinks of your idea? Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear….

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Dear Rony, I hope

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email finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am pleased to hear that you will visit

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next month with family members, and your 30th

birthday

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will be celebrated during

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trip.

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with, I feel

honored

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about your upcoming visit as

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is the first time you will visit

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. I firmly believe that you will enjoy

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trip as

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is a very beautiful country

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people are very friendly. I will suggest some ideas to make your

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memorable

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as having traditional food and enjoying the cultural program at the Peninsula Hotel in Chittagong.

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hotel's

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atmosphere is very suitable for celebrating the

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program.

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, you could try "Hilsha Fish with Brinjal Fry" which is their signature food item.

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, you would like all the ideas suggested above for celebrating your

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. Apart from that, if there are any ideas from your side, please let me know so that we can make your

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program enjoyable here in

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. I am looking forward to your kind reply regarding

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matter. Yours lovingly, Faisal

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logical structure

Ensure logical flow of ideas and avoid abrupt transitions between paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.

single idea per paragraph

Maintain a single idea per paragraph for clarity and focus.

task achievement

Address all parts of the task adequately, with sufficient detail.

suitable writing tone

Consider a suitable tone for the specific correspondence; a letter to a friend can be less formal but should remain polite and accessible.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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