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The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
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The line graph shows the demand for some junk meals in the UK from 1970 to 1990. clearly can be seen that over the years the consumption of both hamburgers and fish and fries was increasing among the UK citizens.
According to
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 the given data, 1970 was the least popular
food
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 that people asked for with only 20
grams
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. The demand for burgers had a gradual rise over the years until it became the second favourite
food
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 in 1990 when it reached around 2 90
grams
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.
Furthermore
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, fish and chips accounted for a considerable reduction with only 9th
grams
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 in the beginning before they jumped to 500
grams
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at the end
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 of the period and the asking for that type of
food
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 made it the most popular one in 1990. Unlike the previous figures, pizza was the first
food
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 in the mandi among Britain people in 1970,
however
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, it witnessed a noticeable shrink from 300 to 200
grams
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at the end
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 of the year when pizza became the third one.
Overall
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, there was a substantial change in the consumption of the favourite fast
food
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 in The UK over the years

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, grams with synonyms.
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