Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Recent population and
economical
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growth
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in many countries has negatively impacted the
environment
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,which has caused increased concerns among certain
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who suggest that it is possible for countries to have successful economies without damaging the
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,
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others disagree.In
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I will discuss both views
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and explain why I believe that it is possible to have both a successful
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and a clean
environment
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. First,those who believe that a successful
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and a clean
environment
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can co-exist are convinced that there are certain measures that
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government
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the government
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can take to improve the situation.
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, the
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can reduce the negative impacts caused by
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growth
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by restricting low regarding logging and plastic production.
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can be done by setting strict laws about the number of trees allowed to be cut down daily.
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, the
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can restrict factories from producing too much plastic,
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shops can be banned from using plastic for packaging certain goods.
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, fruit and vegetables can be sold without wrappers .
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, the
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can encourage
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to recycle more by providing free collections of recycled items once a month.
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, recycling bins can be added to different areas of towns and cities.
On the other hand
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, other groups of
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believe that it is impossible to have a successful
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without affecting the
environment
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. They think ,that the
growth
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of the
economy
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is directly linked to the changes in the
environment
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.
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, in order for the
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to grow is vital
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the infrastructure by building roads, it
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is
necessary to improve public transportation, build factories,and create workspaces for
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.To achieve that , the
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has to provide spaces, which often results in cutting down trees or in the usage of uninhabited fields as building sites. To summarise, recent
economical
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growth
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has had a negative impact on the
environment
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.Certain
people
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raised concern as they are convinced that a successful
economy
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and a clean
environment
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can co-exist .
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,other
people
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have different opinions.
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changes in the
economy
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can have a negative impact on the
environment
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, I believe,that if certain measures are taken by the
government
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and citizens follow those measures,
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can dramatically reduce the impact on the
environment
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and countries' economies can still
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growth
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without damaging the
environment
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.
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Task Response
You provided a clear answer to the essay question by discussing both views and expressing your own opinion. Ensure that your examples and arguments are well-supported to strengthen your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay shows good overall coherence and cohesion with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Make sure to use linking words and cohesive devices to further improve the overall structure of your essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economically successful
  • Clean environment
  • Sustainable practices
  • Green technologies
  • Eco-tourism
  • Healthier workforce
  • Healthcare costs
  • Short-term economic growth
  • Profit over environment
  • Heavy industries
  • Developing countries
  • Sacrifice
  • Economic development
  • Transitioning
  • Balance
  • Sustainable development
  • International cooperation
  • Incentivize
  • Eco-friendly business practices
  • Investment in education
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