The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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The pie chart demonstrates why causes agricultural
land
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produces less than before survey years. The table illustrates how
deforestation
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, over-cultivation, and over-grazing affected three regions (North
America
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,
Europe
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, and
Oceania
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) in the 1990s.
Overall
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, Over-grazing is the main reason which makes
land
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degrade
while
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other reasons only need to take less responsibility for
this
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.
On the other hand
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, in
Europe
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, 23% of
land
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faces the problem of degradation but only 5% of
land
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in North
America
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has
this
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environmental problem. To face the question of which
land
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over the world is degraded, we can see over-grazing takes the biggest proportion, 35%,
whereas
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deforestation
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and over-cultivation only maintain 30 % and 28%. Another reason which causes
land
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degradation only takes 7%. The
land
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of
Europe
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has 23% faced
land
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degradation
while
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the
land
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of North
America
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and
Oceania
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only takes 5% and 13% respectively.
Deforestation
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is caused 9.8% of the
land
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in
Europe
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to be less productive. In contrast, only 0.2% of
deforestation
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happened in North
America
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while
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there is only 1.7% in
Oceania
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. There is 7.7% of
Europe
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's
land
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degraded by over-cultivation
while
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0% and 3.3% in
Oceania
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and North
America
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. 11.3% of
Oceania
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's
land
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faces the issue of over-grazing
whereas
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North
America
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and
Oceania
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have only 5.5% and 1.5% of
land
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become weaker and weaker respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words land, deforestation, america, europe, oceania with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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