The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart demonstrates why causes agricultural
land
produces less than before survey years. The table illustrates how Use synonyms
deforestation
, over-cultivation, and over-grazing affected three regions (North Use synonyms
America
, Use synonyms
Europe
, and Use synonyms
Oceania
) in the 1990s.
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Overall
, Over-grazing is the main reason which makes Linking Words
land
degrade Use synonyms
while
other reasons only need to take less responsibility for Linking Words
this
. Linking Words
On the other hand
, in Linking Words
Europe
, 23% of Use synonyms
land
faces the problem of degradation but only 5% of Use synonyms
land
in North Use synonyms
America
has Use synonyms
this
environmental problem.
To face the question of which Linking Words
land
over the world is degraded, we can see over-grazing takes the biggest proportion, 35%, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
deforestation
and over-cultivation only maintain 30 % and 28%. Another reason which causes Use synonyms
land
degradation only takes 7%.
The Use synonyms
land
of Use synonyms
Europe
has 23% faced Use synonyms
land
degradation Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
land
of North Use synonyms
America
and Use synonyms
Oceania
only takes 5% and 13% respectively. Use synonyms
Deforestation
is caused 9.8% of the Use synonyms
land
in Use synonyms
Europe
to be less productive. In contrast, only 0.2% of Use synonyms
deforestation
happened in North Use synonyms
America
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while
there is only 1.7% in Linking Words
Oceania
. There is 7.7% of Use synonyms
Europe
's Use synonyms
land
degraded by over-cultivation Use synonyms
while
0% and 3.3% in Linking Words
Oceania
and North Use synonyms
America
. 11.3% of Use synonyms
Oceania
's Use synonyms
land
faces the issue of over-grazing Use synonyms
whereas
North Linking Words
America
and Use synonyms
Oceania
have only 5.5% and 1.5% of Use synonyms
land
become weaker and weaker respectively.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, deforestation, america, europe, oceania with synonyms.
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