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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driver less. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be. Passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Every company is trying to add some new feature in their
vehicles
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, some
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 argue that in the upcoming few years, transportation will be
driverless
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 and inside those
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 who are travelling will be Passengers. I accept that
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cars
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 will have some pros for the public
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 for the government in helping the traffic system, yet I believe that these types of
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 will bring some cons as technical and environmental. On the one hand, Self-driving
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 will help
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 to drive without any driver and because of that
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 are free to Spend
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 time with their family and friends and watch some movies
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 travelling.
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, these
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 are controlled by AI which will avoid traffic jams and rushes so everyone will be on time in their offices.
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 in European countries most of the cities are popular and have a lot of population and visitors face traffic problems
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,
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cars
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 are the best option for their governments to invest money in self-driving industries.
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, these programmed
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 have Some disadvantages.
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, accuracy is the main issue because of that
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 will never believe in AI as much as humans.
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, Unemployment is another problem Of
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vehicles
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, because a large proportion of
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 are driving taxis or working with online companies like Uber.
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, these types of
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 are too much expensive and because of that, it's hard for third-class
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 to afford them. In conclusion,
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vehicles
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 will have some impacts on our society, but I still believe that
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 can't overshadow the advantages of self-driving
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Driverless technology
  • Traffic efficiency
  • Cybersecurity
  • Data privacy
  • Infrastructure
  • Economic impacts
  • Accessibility
  • Social inclusion
  • Emissions
  • Fuel consumption
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Human error
  • Congestion
  • Independence
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