The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the types of work that men and women do in the UK in the year 1992.
Overall
it can be seen, while
female employees mostly do non-manual labor
, male workers do both white-collar and blue-collar Change the spelling
labour
works
.
The proportion of clerical and related and managerial and professional jobs related to female workers accounted for a significant majority, 31% and 29% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
work
In contrast
, the fraction of craft or similar works
that women did made
up 27% as well and the percentage of unknown non-manual Change the verb form
make
works
was 9%. Also
, 3% of female workers worked in other manual occupations and only a tiny fraction worked as general labourers.
Nevertheless
, just over a third of men worked in the managerial and professional sector and just over a quarter did a craft or similar work. Similarly
, 24% of male employees accounted for an unknown work fraction. Clerical and related and other non-manual jobs represented similar results, 6% for both of them. 2% of men did general labourers
Fix the agreement mistake
labourer
works
in 1992.Correct subject-verb agreement
work
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