write a report for a university lecturer on expenditure on fast food

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The graph provides a visual representation of the expenditures of three type of junk
food
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in
UK
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the UK
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which
consumed
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by three different groups that
includes
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high, average and low
income
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in 1990.
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,
people
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with high
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income
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incomes
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spent more money on fast
food
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.
humberger
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hamburger
Schlumberger
was the highly preferred
food
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among the high and
average
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average-income
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income
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group
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.
According to
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the graph,
humburger
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hamburger
was the highest preferred
food
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among high and
average
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average-income
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income
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people
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. More than 40 billion
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pounds
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pound
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was spent on
humburger
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hamburger
hamburgers
.
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, pizza was the least preferred
food
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among
low earning
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people
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(6 billion).
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, fish and ships were the second
preffered
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preferred
food
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among average earning
people
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where
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humburger
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hamburger
was first(25 billion
pound
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pounds
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).
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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