The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008

The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008
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The pie charts give information about the range of
food
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consumption in the
world
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in general
as well as
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in China and India specifically.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the proportion of processed
food
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accounted for the major of the total consumption,
while
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nuts and seeds made up a small part of the charts. In detail, there was 41% of processed meals consumed by the
world
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population, which was much higher than China and India, at 34% and 39 respectively.
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, the percentage of vegetables and fruits in the
world
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and India were lower than 30%, at 29% and 23%,
whereas
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the data in China was slightly greater, at 32 percen%. Turning to the other kind of
food
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, Indians and the
world
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population ate animal
food
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for almost a quarter of their total
food
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consumption, unlike the Chinese who consumed less than others at around 15%.
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, nuts and seeds were the least
food
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in demand.
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