Some people believe that schools should reward those students who show excellent academic performance while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded.

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Few sections of society have the notion that
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students
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who display outstanding academic achievements should be rewarded,
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others prefer to think those who show notable development in
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marks should be gifted. I believe, it is important to admit that both views have their own merits.
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essay will substantiate my views with relevant examples followed by the conclusion. On the one hand, rewarding merit
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is very lucrative to boosting
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students
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it is
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encourangement
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encouragement
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another student
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students
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to study well.
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, in my school, I was in 2nd
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,
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got inspired by one of my friends, as he
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by
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collector on
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day event because he got first rank in
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the finall
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finall
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final
examinations. Eventually, I worked hard in 3rd
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to
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receive
the prize,
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result
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exelled
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excelled
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in my subjects,
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I was not the topper of the
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but it improved my knowledge
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subjects
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, those
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who consistently worked and got improvement in their marks,
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must
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be rewarded
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, to motivate
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all kinds of pupils, including slow learners or quick-witted persons. To illustrate,
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quick learners in my
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, there are
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who do not have the ability to understand quickly every sort of
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, my
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teacher gave some gifts, like pens or
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chocolates
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students
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, as a
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consequence
there was
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an improvement
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their academics.
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, undoubtedly high scoring
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do not need any motivation as they are
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self-motivated
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,
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underachievers do need motivation in the form of rewards to stay on the right path to success. I do believe, schools should investigate their way of teaching and use more visual tools for helping
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic performance
  • excellent academic performance
  • significant improvement
  • motivates
  • aspires
  • intelligence
  • hard work
  • dedication
  • competitive spirit
  • academic success
  • struggle academically
  • perseverance
  • innate ability
  • confidence
  • valued
  • growth mindset
  • inclusive environment
  • holistic education
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