Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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When it comes to taking steps to reduce the effects on plant and animal species caused by human activities, some people think that it is possible and feasible,
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others deny the possibility because it has been too late for us to do anything. The reason why people think it’s too late is probably that some destruction caused by human activities is irreversible. Many
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, but their habitats have been terribly destroyed by humans so that they could not inhabit and even extinct. We almost don’t have enough time to improve the situation which is an extremely long process, as these
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will completely disappear before acquiring a new home Other people think it’s possible for us to improve the situation through effective means may because our technology and science have been mature enough for us to overcome some problems affecting plant and animal species.
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haven’t been able to live in their original environment, we can take some steps like establishing natural reserves or creating conditions for them to live. For those
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facing extinction, we can feed them until they could live by themselves. In my opinion, no matter whether the methods are effective, we should try our best to improve the possibility for those
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to live, which is our responsibility. Without doing anything, they will disappear surprisingly faster and even damage the ecosystem
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • extinction
  • reforestation
  • conservation programs
  • environmental laws
  • ecosystems
  • technological advances
  • awareness
  • interconnectivity
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • preserving
  • wildlife
  • mitigate
  • empowering
  • economic and social benefits
  • incentives
  • conservation efforts
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