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many people think that the world should speak one language, others argue that countries should have its own languages. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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These days there is an ongoing debate between
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 about whether
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 around the world should speak one
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 or if each country should have its own, my opinion is that having a common communication
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 each county should have its own
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 ,essay we will discuss the issue using some examples to support and demonstrate some points. There are several reasons why
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 argue for a shared
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 in all countries, one of them is that it could be much easier for
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 to communicate and share
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, there are claims that
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 would spend more time on their career, business, studies rather than trying to understand or learn a new
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. A study conducted in UAE showed that parents all around the world are focusing on their kid's English
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 and not their mother
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 because it's wildly used these days and everyone understands it . Those who argue that countries should have their own
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 have a different point of view and say that it can actually be a good thing.
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 each country has its own unique history and culture which is a huge part of
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's identity taking away someone's mother
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 is like erasing their history , it can
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 be argued that having different languages and backgrounds is actually really interesting
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 can share their life experience with others for ,example im a trilingual person English is not my first
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. I speak English
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 Chinese and I can understand Turkish, when
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 first started learning Chinese it was so difficult because they don't have letters its all characters and you are supposed to memorize each word it took me 10 years to use it fluently,
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 it's important for
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 to learn other languages it's not only fun it can be helpful sometimes.
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 there are strong arguments on both sides of the case. I personally believe that each county should have its own
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 and I recommend
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 to learn at least 3 languages as it can be a really helpful way to communicate with others in all aspects of life.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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