The maps shows the town of Lynnfield

The maps shows the town of Lynnfield
The two maps illustrate the radical improvements in the
town
of Lynnfield between 1936 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the main areas improved over the duration,
while
the centre remained almost the same.
According to
the given map, in 1936 nature made up most of Lynnfield
town
and each of the four external sides had related to agriculture or a river.
Furthermore
, the centre of the
town
was allocated to provide essential facilities
such
as a flower
shop
, bank and library on the south side of the main road,
while
the north wing presented the services of the butchers, sweet
shop
and a post office. Turning to the second map, the was considerable development in that
town
in 2007. Most of the trees were cut and the cycle path was turned into a road.
Moreover
, the river was removed to create a residential area for citizens.
In addition
, both the government offices and the next farmland were converted into a museum and a golf course.
On the other hand
, most of the central shops remained the same except the flower
shop
which was altered into a travel agency.
Finally
, a sweet
shop
and butchery were merged to extend and replaced with a supermarket.
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