he diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Illustrated in the flowchart is the procedure which students, who have graduated from high school, follow when applying for a college course.
Overall
, there are several steps commencing with high school graduation and ending with either rejection of the application
or successfully entering university.
Once the application
form has been downloaded and completed by high school graduates, it is forwarded to the university admin department where there are 3 possible outcomes. If it is rejected, it will either be cancelled, or the applicant can apply for a different course and resubmit their alternate application
to the same department.
Alternatively, when the form is provisionally accepted, after a 2-week consideration period, the applicant is required to gather and provide additional documents to support their application
and then
submit these to the college. Once candidates are accepted, at the end
of a fourteen-day appraisal, they can complete their registration with the Dean, after they have chosen their preferred subjects and then
they finally
join the college.Submitted by Niamh Gal on
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