You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter: – Describe what you purchased, – explain why you are not happy with the purchase, – tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment regarding the
printer
that I bought
last
week from your company online as the alignment and the colour quality of printing documents is not as good as I expected. I have ordered the latest version of the Canon
printer
in exchange for my previous
printer
in order to enjoy the new features of the equipment for my work. I had rather preferred to go for in-store purchases of gadgets but as my nearby store didn't get the model that I was looking for, made me buy it online
instead
. Actually, I need to print so many documents on a daily basis as I am working from home.
Therefore
, the
printer
is foremost important for me in accordance with printing all the important information of my clients. As I wanted, it got delivered within 2 days of my purchase. I found it pleasing to my eye when I had a First glance of it because of the texture and the features of the
printer
mentioned in the given catalogue.
Finally
, after the installation, when I printed the first document, the alignment of the letters was off, unclear and faded.
Moreover
, it kept showing the message of filling the ink tank even though the tanks were fully filled. As I have already mailed my previous
printer
to the company, left me with no other choice but to rush to the nearby printing shop which cost me a lot of money daily. I would like to exchange the broken machine for a new one as soon as possible. I would appreciate your immediate attention to
this
matter. Yours faithfully, Prabh
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