Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: • suggest someone who deserves the reward • mention what they have done to help the community • say what reward you would like to give this person

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. I am writing
this
letter in lieu of the article you posted on 23rd February 2023 in the chronicle about , rewarding individuals who have contributed to society . I would like to recommend Hamrayeva Munisa as a candidate for
this
. Today , she is a student at the University of World Languages She is a lively, kind and intelligent girl . Despite her young age, she always works for humans and tries to help the poor . Her frequent charity evenings for sick and orphaned children are especially commendable . From my point of view, it is very helpful for society .
For
this
reason, there is no one more deserving of
this
reward than her. Because her charity for the children in society is
also
a merit and a work done so that love does not disappear between people .
Therefore
, she deserves a gold medal award . Looking forward to hearing back from you with a positive response . Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Maxmasoliyeva Joziba.
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Examples:

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