The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the population aged over 65 years old from 1940 to 2040 in three
particularly
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countries, the
USA
,
Sweden
and
Japan
. As is shown in the graph, aged over 65 Americans had the highest percentage at the beginning, 9%, followed by
Sweden
(6%) and
Japan
(5%) in 1940. After that, the population of the
USA
and
Sweden
had a steady rise at 15% and 14% respectively in 1980,
whereas
Japan
showed a downward trend, below 5%. The population of Japanese elders predict to climb slightly around 10% by 2030 and would increase dramatically
over
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26% in 2040, replacing the place of the others.
On the other hand
, the percentage of elders in the
USA
had a plateau from 1980 (15% )to 2020 (14%). In 2040, it is expected to increase steadily to 22%, the lowest one in three countries.
Moreover
, the figure for
Sweden
reached a peak at 20% by 2010 , and
predict
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predicts
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a minimal decline in the decade, which will grow to 25% in 2040.
To conclude
, the information shows people who
65-year-old
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65 years old
and over in
Japan
was the lowest percentage
while
the
USA
is the highest in the initial.
However
, there will be an exchange position in 2040.
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