The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the population aged over 65 years old from 1940 to 2040 in three
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countries, the Replace the word
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USA
, Use synonyms
Sweden
and Use synonyms
Japan
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As is shown in the graph, aged over 65 Americans had the highest percentage at the beginning, 9%, followed by Use synonyms
Sweden
(6%) and Use synonyms
Japan
(5%) in 1940. After that, the population of the Use synonyms
USA
and Use synonyms
Sweden
had a steady rise at 15% and 14% respectively in 1980, Use synonyms
whereas
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Japan
showed a downward trend, below 5%. The population of Japanese elders predict to climb slightly around 10% by 2030 and would increase dramatically Use synonyms
over
26% in 2040, replacing the place of the others.
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On the other hand
, the percentage of elders in the Linking Words
USA
had a plateau from 1980 (15% )to 2020 (14%). In 2040, it is expected to increase steadily to 22%, the lowest one in three countries. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the figure for Linking Words
Sweden
reached a peak at 20% by 2010 , and Use synonyms
predict
a minimal decline in the decade, which will grow to 25% in 2040.
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To conclude
, the information shows people who Linking Words
65-year-old
and over in Correct your spelling
65 years old
Japan
was the lowest percentage Use synonyms
while
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USA
is the highest in the initial. Use synonyms
However
, there will be an exchange position in 2040.Linking Words
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