Logging of the rainforests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

Taking down tropical woods is a serious issue and it may cause the end of
life
of animals and human
life
. I agree with
this
definition as rainforests are so desired by people. And they help to recycle air.
Take
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down
of
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the
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tropical woods is a serious issue and it may cause
to
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the end of
life
of
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the animal
an animal
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animal
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animals
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and human
life
. I agree with
this
definition as
rain forests
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rainforests
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are so desired
for
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by
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people. And they help to
recycling
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recycle
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air.
Take
Wrong verb form
Taking
show examples
down
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
tropical woods is a serious issue and it may cause
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the end of
life
of
Add an article
the animal
an animal
show examples
animal
Fix the agreement mistake
animals
show examples
and human
life
. I agree with
this
definition as
rain forests
Correct your spelling
rainforests
show examples
are so desired
for
Change preposition
by
show examples
people. And they help to
recycling
Change the verb form
recycle
show examples
air.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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