The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts indicate how the average proportion of three types of nutrients that may cause some illnesses if people consume too much used in typical meals in the USA. These nutrients are
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
.
Overall
, it can be seen that Americans consume the major percentages of sodium
and saturated fat at dinner. Meanwhile, there is the largest proportion of consumption
of added sugar
is snacks.
First,
obviously, Dinner is the main source of sodium
and saturated fat with 43% and 37% respectively, along with
it containing about a quarter of daily consumption
of added sugar
. It cannot be ignored that there is the second source of sodium
and saturated fat that is
lunch with 29% and 26% respectively.
Regarding breakfast, all three recorded types of ingredients are at the lowest rate at which USA's citizens are eaten with 14% of sodium
, 16% of saturated fat and 16% of added sugar
. Finally
, although
snacks contain only 14% and 21% of sodium
and saturated fat in Americans' daily consumption
, it, however
, dominates added sugar
consumption
with 42%.Submitted by sam132457 on
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