You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, say: ● why you need to use this private room ● what you need them to provide for the party ● inquire about the price of the food you are ordering

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter in order to inquire about the services that are provided by your hotel and to book a private room for my family gathering.

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, I would like to state that my sister is having her 18th birthday and to celebrate her birthday, I and my family are willing to book a personal room in your hotel so that all of the members of the family could gather under one roof.

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, I am anticipating that birthday decorations would be

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part of

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since I have seen an advertisement that hotel staff provides decoration services on behalf of booking. We want a subtle but mixed-coloured theme, especially including white and golden balloons

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a decorated table so that it would be easier to perform the celebration around it.

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, I have heard that you serve Thai cuisine which is the most delicious one in town. Could you please share the menu card with us so that it can become easier to choose the most popular items that are your speciality? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sana.

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greeting and closing

Ensure the greeting and closing are formal and appropriate for a letter to a hotel manager.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph should focus on conveying a single idea clearly and coherently.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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