The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The diagram below illustrates one method of manufacturing ceramic
pots
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the production of ceramic pots
consists of 4 main stages: collecting, crushing and moulding, assembling and painting until the final product is ready.
First , clay
is collected from the ground by the digger and transported to the factory by a truck. Next,
pieces of clay
are crushed and ground followed by mixing the ground clay
with the mixer and moving it to the moulding equipment where it is left for drying for 4 to 6 hours.In the next stage,assembled clay
pots
are dried in the oven at 1000 degrees Celsius.
The final stage begins when the pots
are dry .Which consists of dipping pots
into the bucket full of paint and lastly
putting it into the colour firing. This
is the final stage of producing ceramic pots
.Submitted by Niamh Gal on
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