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Some people think multiple choice tests are better than tests which require you to write an essay. Other people think that tests which require you to write an essay are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #choice #tests
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 of people believe that multiple selection tests are better than
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writing
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 an
essay
,
while
 others think that
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 an
essay
are
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is
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 better. I think that it is more convenient to do writing and describe more about
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the title
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. Nobody would dispute
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 fact that
,
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 to describe own opinion and
knowledge
 an
essay
more
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is more
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 convenient, the reason of it can that in given questions we can give an example, suggestion and etc.
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Furthermore
 when we explain some kind of information we share
with
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fully
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 information and
knowledge
. As
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regard
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multiple choice
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,
firstly
 even individuals who
does
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 not know can choose it randomly or write
off
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it off
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 from someone.
Secondly
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,Secondly
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 it is vivid that the answers are given in brief and
student
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students
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 cannot respond fully.
Likewise
, there are times when we do tests
answer
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that answer
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 could be confused and
misspelled
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 by the authors.Which leads us to a dead end. In conclusion, the best way to write is an
essay
 where we can prove
out
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our
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knowledge
 and clearly describe all of our
knowledge
 and topics that we came across. And it is
also
 an honest way where you cannot cheat.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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