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governments spends much more money for education. More money should be spent on free time activities. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

#governments #money #education #time #activities
In recent budget discussions,
government
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the government
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 has significantly
increase
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 the budget for
education
 to attract more students to pursue
education
 in
government
 institutions. And to attract
further
, they are providing merit scholarships for young talents. But
education
 is not only the learning that
supposed
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 to happen
instead
 Sports and Arts should
also
 be encouraged.
Current
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 budget includes more allocation towards the infrastructure of multiple educational institutions across the state. It
help
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 the local management to renovate and scale up to the needs of
these young talent
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.Though the funds cannot be equally divided among
the
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all institutions, because of the varying student and staff headcounts.
Government
 should organise regular events to showcase extra-curricular activities.
This
 will inspire children to participate in different activities and builds confidence. It will be the foundation for them to take
new
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 challenges and drives
continously
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continuously
 to improve
further
. In my opinion,
government
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 should encourage children to explore and exhibit new talents
along with
education
.
This
 will ensure harmony in
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society by giving fair chances to everyone to fail and to succeed.
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