Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The Internet is a repository storing information that
are
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published over the world and with
such
immense quantities of that related to many aspects,
such
as services,
job
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and job
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opportunities, it becomes the locus for many
job
seekers.
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perception has reinforced the idea that those
are
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unemployed should be entitled
a
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smartphone
so that they can gain access to these data.
However
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this
initiative seems not to be optimal because of its feasibility and the imprecise capability to solve
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the problem
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problem
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. The high percentage of unemployment is contributed
by
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many factors and a
smartphone
can do nothing to decrease that.
Although
being able to access
to
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the Internet make it easier for many to seek opportunities,
for
example
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many companies usually try to outsource those from developing countries with low living cost so that they can cut down the cost of manufacturing,
this
action is not enough for comprehensively providing
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a job
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for those in
labor
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pool;
Instead
, the amount of money used for equipping phones can be allocated into vocational training, improving infrastructure to attract more international investment, generating more
job
creations. Rather than letting workers engage in the
labor
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pool with no more knowledge but a
smartphone
, training them to become skilled
ones
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would offer
a wider payoffs
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a wider payoff
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.
Such
an initiative can pose threat to both the beneficiaries and the government- the organization
that is
responsible for
phone
supply.
To
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phone
recipients,
they
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can be the victim of many predators that target their private information or their entitled
phone
and chances are the
phone
can not act effectively as a tool to help users but
giving
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opportunities to those having
bad
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a bad
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intention
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.
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the perspective of the government,
this
proposal requires a huge national budget and the probability to make changes throughout society is still imprecise. The average price for a
smartphone
falls around 130 USD ,and with many countries carrying a high rate of unemployment, implementing
this
plan seems to bring more pitfalls rather than advantages. In conclusion,
to solve
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unemployment
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problem,
it
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demands many sectors to address its roots.
With a
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mere
phone
,
this
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can not only bring
harms
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harm
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to owners but
also
cause many financial issues for the administration to deal with.
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