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It is generallybelieved that the internet is an excellent of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find informatio. Discuss Both views and give your opinion

#internet #communication #people #place #informatio
Understanding and embracing technology is an important subject in the domain of digital journalism (Eldridge & Franklin, 2018). Digital innovation has been widely recognized as the key to solving the current crisis in the
news
 industry. With Online
News
Videos
 becoming increasingly prominent among
news
agencies
, more and more traditional
media
agencies
 started to invest in
this
 new technology with a more enterprising approach (Kalogeropoulos & Nielsen, 2018). Online
News
Videos
has
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 become a frontier practice (Vázquez-Herreroet al., 2022) to observe and analyse how traditional
media
agencies
 deal with digital challenges which were introduced by new technologies
such
 as smartphones and social
media
. Guided by multi-stakeholder theory and helped by the Technical Organizational Environment (TOE) framework, the main purpose of
this
 study is to understand how traditional
media
agencies
 stakeholders (
media
 managers, reporters, editors, readers, researchers, etc.) think online
news
videos
 , which factors driver traditional
media
 companies produce online
news
videos
.
This
 study will use the case study method. Taking one provincial
media
 agency in central China as the research object, selecting 25 interviewees which including 3-5 leaders, 5 editors, 5 reporters, 5 readers and 5 academic researchers for a semi-structured interview, and collecting a fair amount of online
news
videos
 for content analysis which including topic content, production quality, technology application and dissemination effects.
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