The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The diagram depicts the figure of donators in the UK who grant money for donations to the 5 age range in the period of 1990 to 2010.
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, it is apparent that the grants are dominated by middle age and advanced
adults
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.
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, in 2010, the total of donators from middle
adults
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declined slightly. That trend
also
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occurred in the adolescent and young adult categories. To start with, in 1990, the
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of 36-50 ages recorded as the
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that has the most donors by more than 40% followed by advanced
adults
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in second place,
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the young adult
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showed in reverse which accounted for about 16%.
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, older millennials and the elderly shared the same presentation which doubled from the young adult categories.
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, in 2010, starting all categories from young
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, middle
adults
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, and the
group
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of 36-50 experienced a downward trend which declined about 5% from the starting percentage except the
group
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of young
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reduced 3 times from the initial number.
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, the
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of advanced
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and elderly depicted a slight increase by no more than 5% from the initial number.
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