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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.
The chart compares the percentage of the population who were unemployed in rural and urban
areas
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 in Australia in the year 2012.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the figure for rural
areas
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 decreased.
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, more people who lived in urban
areas
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 lost their jobs. Focusing on the first two quarters of 2012, there was about 6.5% and 2.2% of citizens who had no jobs in rural and urban
areas
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 respectively. the period around the second quarter, the figure for the unemployment rate of urban
areas
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 reached to point of about 4% of the population,
by contrast
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, the number of unemployed in rural
areas
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 decreased to the lowest point presenting about 4.5%. The time interval between the second and third quarters showed that the figures became a reversed trend in rural and urban
areas
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. the number of rural
areas
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 increased when the number of urban
areas
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 decreased. After the third quarter, the figure for the unemployment rate in rural
areas
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 held at about 5% for the rest of the period whit little fluctuation. But the unemployment rate in urban
areas
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 reached the highest point
at the end
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 of the period with about 4.8%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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