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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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There is an argument that whether schools should have
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 plan to teach
food
-related or other important
subjects
 to the
students
.
While
students
 can receive and learn different knowledge in other important
subjects
, I believe that learning more about
food
 in school can make
students
' future lives better.
However
, we still cannot ignore the importance of studying other
subjects
,
for example
,
Mathematics
.
First,
Mathematics
 is one of the
subjects
 that
students
 should familiarize themselves it. Math can provide the foundation of most other science
subjects
 and can train logical thinking, so the
students
' outcomes or results of other regions will be better if
students
 can master
Mathematics
. Second, "Big Data" is a future developing trend in society, which require more people who understand data mining.
Therefore
, learning well in
Mathematics
also
 helps in
students
' future careers.
Although
 it is important that
students
 should hold tight employment opportunities, schools still have a responsibility to teach the correct values about how to be a responsible person
such
 as saving
food
 and saving the world.
Food
 is undoubtedly a requirement in our lives,
however
, a lot of people in the world suffer from
food
 shortages. If more
students
 can be
food
 scientists and make an effort to produce cheaper some "new type
food
"
such
 as extracting the protein from worms and vegetation, which can solve
this
 problem effectively.
In addition
, the issues of wastage of
food
 could be improved if
students
 realized the processes of producing
food
.
For instance
, the activities of visiting farms or pastures can train
students
' consciousness of saving
food
.
Students
 prepare the
food
 manually like collecting eggs or milk, and they can feel how difficult in producing
food
.
As a result
, a good habit of saving
food
 can be nurtured in
students
' minds. In summary, schools should focus on teaching more
food
-related knowledge to
students
, not ignoring the importance of other
subjects
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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