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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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These days, whether professional
workers
 should be working only in their Country until finishing their Training has sparked much debate. Some people assent that The experienced
workers
 should stay Locally to
work
 when they do their training programme. And others believe that
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 they should be free to
work
 and travel abroad. In my opinion, I am In Favour of the latter
views
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.
To begin
, many professional
workers
such
 as doctors and nurses have
desire
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 to
work
 in
the
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poor
Countries
; In order to help poverty people, which is very important to Improve the relationships between societies.
For example
, In 2019, after
spread
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 of
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 (Cavid 19) many
Countries
 need more doctors and nurses to
work
 in their hospitals because of emergency situations at that time.
Furthermore
,
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well-experienced
workers
 have
right
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 to choose their
work
's place. which is unfair to ask him just to stay in their Country until they finish Their training period.
Besides
, some professionals need To learn new skills and they can do that if they have
opportunity
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 to travel abroad to another country . In the Middle East,
for example
 ,many doctors and nurses decided to travel to the UK to learn advanced skills relating to their careers. Admittedly,the training programmes are usually funded by the government in most
countries
 ,which is very Costive and would be able to Increase the burden on the government ;
as a result
, if the professional worker stays to
work
 ,They help to lower
this
 cost by saving
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The
goverments'
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government's
government
governments
moneys
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, which should be baying as salaries for them. In Conclusion, having considered both views.
Although
 there are some benefits from professionals
work
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in their
Countries
. I believe that They should have the freedom to choose their working
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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