The chart below gives distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.

The chart below gives distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.
The following bar chart illustrates the percentage of car usage all over the world
in
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different continents in 2008 and 2016.
Overall
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, it can be easily seen that North
America
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and
Europe
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have
enormous
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amount of car share,
whereas
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compared to other areas like South
America
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,
Autralia
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Australia
and Asia consist little amount. To start with, in 2008,
Europe
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had the peak percentage which is slightly below 60%, after 8 years in 2016 it dramatically declined
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almost 30% which is second after North
America
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50
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%.
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, North
America
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had almost 30% in 2008,
thus
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that it rose steadily
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approximately 20%.
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North
America
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and
Europe
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are taking peak placements, areas like South
America
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, Australia and Asia all are shown below 10% in 2008 and 2016.
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, over
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time their proportion slightly rose for couple
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. In conclusion, global car share
are
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mostly taken by North
America
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and
Europe
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,
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having astonishing numbers compared to other countries that are not even getting more than 10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, europe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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