The chart below gives distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.

The chart below gives distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.
The following bar chart illustrates the percentage of car usage all over the world
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different continents in 2008 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be easily seen that North
America
and
Europe
have
enormous
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amount of car share,
whereas
compared to other areas like South
America
,
Autralia
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Australia
and Asia consist little amount. To start with, in 2008,
Europe
had the peak percentage which is slightly below 60%, after 8 years in 2016 it dramatically declined
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almost 30% which is second after North
America
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%.
Nevertheless
, North
America
had almost 30% in 2008,
thus
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that it rose steadily
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approximately 20%.
While
North
America
and
Europe
are taking peak placements, areas like South
America
, Australia and Asia all are shown below 10% in 2008 and 2016.
On the other hand
, over
the
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time their proportion slightly rose for couple
digits
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. In conclusion, global car share
are
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mostly taken by North
America
and
Europe
,
by
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having astonishing numbers compared to other countries that are not even getting more than 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, europe with synonyms.
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