The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The line graph illustrates
requests
for information in person
,by letter/email and by telephone
ways at a tourist office in the UK between January and June
Overall
,all three lines started with a number less than 1000.However
,two of them were by the end of the graph risen sharply,while
the other one fell even to a less number.
In January,in-person
requests
started to rocket,while
the leader by the amount,the requests
by telephone
slid till February.However
,after the winter ,requests
by telephone
had a notable rise,while
requests
in person
continued to increase.By the second month, the telephone
ones were stable and were equal to 1000.At the same time requests
in person
grew to about 1300.However
,after stability,requests
by phone rose sharply and did it till the end,while
requests
in person
did it too,but more abruptly
.By letter requests
were almost stable till March.After that number from about 700 decreased to almost 400.From May to Jun applying letters apply continued to be steady.Submitted by andriykolomiyets12 on
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