The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

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The two maps demonstrated the differences between what Felixstone was like in 1967 and 2001.

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, Felixstowe has been modernized with the addition of new

facilities

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and the transformation of existing

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. The significant change is that some recreational

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such

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as a Swimming pool, hotel and two tennis courts have been constructed on the site's farmland.

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, in 1967, in Felixstone there used to be huge farmland, which turned into leisure

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such

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as a hotel, swimming pool and tennis courts in 2001.

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, there were some other amenities

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as a Fish market, Marina and Pier in 1967. All of them which were demolished and converted to a single private beach on the right side of Felixtone in 2001. It is

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worth noting that there were some great

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, namely a Golf course, two shops, a high street and Cafe in 1967 in Felixstone. Interestingly, all of them remained unchanged in 2001. The

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main change is wind turbines have appeared on the left side of Felixstowe near trees.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

176 words

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The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

Topic: In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.

As the world becomes technologically advanced,computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. what are some job positions that may be lost because of computers?What are some problems that may result from this situation?

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?