The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.
The two maps demonstrated the differences between what Felixstone was like in 1967 and 2001.
Overall
, Felixstowe has been modernized with the addition of new
facilities
and the transformation of existing
facilities
. The significant change is that some recreational
facilities
such
as a Swimming pool, hotel and two tennis courts have been constructed on the site's farmland.
It is clear that
, in 1967, in Felixstone there used to be huge farmland, which turned into leisure
facilities
such
as a hotel, swimming pool and tennis courts in 2001.
In addition
, there were some other amenities
such
as a Fish market, Marina and Pier in 1967. All of them which were demolished and converted to a single private beach on the right side of Felixtone in 2001. It is
also
worth noting that there were some great
facilities
, namely a Golf course, two shops, a high street and Cafe in 1967 in Felixstone. Interestingly, all of them remained unchanged in 2001. The
last
main change is wind turbines have appeared on the left side of Felixstowe near trees.
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