Some people think that hosting international sports events is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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Nowadays, the
sports
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industry is currently playing an important role in tourism and economics. It is,
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, discussed by some that being a
host
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country
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of global
sports
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competitions may be beneficial
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others may think it could cause negative drawbacks.
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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of arranging major
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events and explain why I feel that the government of a particular
country
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should as well be concerned about the socioeconomic
situation
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. International
sports
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competitions are not
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mere event for
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enthusiasts, it
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has benefits in terms of tourism for attracting foreigners to the
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. People may
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visit with the purpose of watching games,
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, they are likely to travel around the
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afterwards.
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may
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lead to more income for the
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, the more visitors come, the more job opportunities
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to the locals as they have to prepare adequate services for foreigners. If there were more income and more jobs, the economic
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will be improved, possibly leading to a better quality of life for dwellers in the
host
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country
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. Despite the economic growth, others are aware of unexpected situations that would
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make arranging
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events a catastrophe. The Tokyo Olympics,
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, have been a controversial issue because the government invested a large sum of money in the construction of infrastructure and gigantic
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arenas. Unfortunately, the COVID outbreak made the
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worse as international flights were halted for two years.
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in turn worsened Japan's existing economic crisis because there were neither profits nor tourists coming to the
country
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.
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means that if the
host
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country
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were not in a stable
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, they would encounter many difficulties that would decrease the quality of life of the locals. In conclusion,
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international
sports
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events may bring opportunities, I think the government should be more concerned about whether the socioeconomy of their countries is in a position
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stable enough and should thoroughly consider their resources before deciding to
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the competitions in order to prevent any
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unexpected loss.
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