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Violence in films has led to a number of problems in society. What are these problems and how can they be solved?

#violence #films #society
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widely claimed that violence in films
have
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 impacted
to
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society
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 issues. The multiple examples of
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 and how to tackle with its will be elaborated
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this
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To begin
 with, many people believe that
film
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 industry has been producing some pessimistic consequences to our reality
such
 as
aggrassive
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aggressive
 or
abuse
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 actions, leading to
society
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 issues nowadays. Take Thai drama,
for instance
; the plots illustrate some emotions about
envyness
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Inverness
 and some physical actions in order to protect their
familly
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family
 or even their partner which contributes to wrong directions in the real life
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. From
this
 perspective, it is
entertraining
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entertaining
 on television to keep audiences watching
although
 in
the
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real
society
is
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it
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 rarely reap
benefit
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 from it.
However
, the film or steaming media can be tackled by individuals and
government
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the government
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. In
term
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terms
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 of individuals, monitoring your own children
while
 watching
violence
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 movies and guiding how they can adapt
its
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 in their
society
, and another way is the government should control the program on television to release more optimistic consequences to audiences
instead
 of negative outcomes.
Therefore
, it is crucial that everyone in
society
 should take these actions seriously in order to have a healthy community. In conclusion,
although
 it is undeniable that films play a significant role in our
dialy
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daily
 lifestyle, I am of the opinion that we should tackle
this
 problem by
work
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 together to have
a
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better
environments
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.
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