Some people say that family has the most powerful influence on a child’s development; however, others say that influences such as music, other people,... have the greatest influence on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many today come to the conclusion that the most powerful impact on the
development
of a child is family, Use synonyms
while
other Linking Words
people
believe that the surrounding Use synonyms
factors
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such
as music, Linking Words
acquaintances
, have the most huge influence on Correct word choice
and acquaintances
children
.
On the one hand, family members are commonly the first Use synonyms
people
, Use synonyms
getting
in touch with the baby at Change the verb form
to get
their
very first stage of Change the pronoun
the
their
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the
development
process. From in womb to the age of schooling, most kids spent most of Use synonyms
the
time Change the word
their
beside
their family, especially with their mother. Not only can the family take care of the Replace the word
besides
children
, but the family can Use synonyms
also
be the first Linking Words
children
’s teachers, who show them how to complete the most necessary and fundamental lessons, cleaning Use synonyms
teeths
or using toilets, Correct your spelling
teeth
for instance
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Moreover
, it is believed that Linking Words
children
are the mirror, reflecting their Use synonyms
parents’
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parent’s
behavior
, which means that Change the spelling
behaviour
children
would take all the Use synonyms
behaviors
and characteristics of both Change the spelling
behaviours
of
their mother and father Change preposition
apply
on
their developing stage without filtering them. Change preposition
in
For
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this
reason, Linking Words
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children’
personalities would express the same things Change noun form
children’s
of
their parents, even if they are negative or positive. Change preposition
as
Therefore
, parents would play a crucial role in the Linking Words
development
of Use synonyms
children
.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
trust that outside Use synonyms
factors
would have more influence on Use synonyms
children
’s Use synonyms
development
than their parents. Use synonyms
Factors
, Use synonyms
such
as music or creativity-related, would enhance the creativity and imagination of the kid’s brain, and these kids would be more intelligent, especially if approaching Linking Words
at
the early time of their life. And other Change preposition
apply
factors
, like Use synonyms
the
acquaintances, are believed to Correct article usage
apply
also
have an impact on Linking Words
the
toddlers Correct article usage
apply
due to
the sayings or the positions of other Linking Words
people
, which can affect the kids’ confidence and thoughts about the surrounding things. Use synonyms
For example
, in case the Linking Words
children
lived in the compliments of others Use synonyms
people
or Use synonyms
hearing
less negative opinions about them from others, their confidence in the future would be boosted much more than those who always think about other Wrong verb form
heard
people
’s bad perspectives on them.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
children
spent their Use synonyms
most
early time beside their family and the family is Correct quantifier usage
apply
also
the Linking Words
people
taking care of them during Use synonyms
this
stage, Linking Words
while
other Linking Words
factors
are Use synonyms
also
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