Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt is that these days
people
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can easily know the conditions of the world by a lot of methods. The question is, is it still the newspaper's best way to know the news? Or are the modern methods of reading and watching better? In
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essay, I am going to discuss both views, and my opinion will be given. in terms of the positive side, some
people
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believe that the new ways to read the news are easier and more flexible. The main reason given to support
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claim is that some older
people
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can’t read small letters.
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, current technology
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as cell phones and tablets provides ways to enlarge letters. To illustrate, my father has farsightedness, and he will face difficulty reading small words. Even if he uses magnifying glass he gets a headache.
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, electronic devices are proportion to all kinds of
people
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, especially older ones.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Editorial oversight
  • Investigative journalism
  • Digital divide
  • News cycle
  • Sensationalism
  • Media literacy
  • Filter bubble
  • Echo chamber
  • Citizen journalism
  • Paywall
  • Fake news
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