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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

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Nowadays, in many parts of the
world
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 many people are interested to know the
history
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 of the
house
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 or the building where they live in. There are many reasons that can lead people to investigate the
history
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 of their
house
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 and in
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 I will try to explain them. In my opinion, principally, people want to know about the origins and the
history
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 of their
house
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 for two reasons:
firstly
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, they want to know from whom and how their
house
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 was constructed, what kind of use has been made of it,
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 simply to satisfy their curiosity.
Secondly
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, knowing the past of their home and its
owners
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 and the neighbourhood could help them feel safer and more at ease in daily life. The first way to discover the past of your home is to talk to the residents who have lived in that neighbourhood the longest. In
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way
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 you can know what happened and what usually happens in that zone. Another way to know something about the
house
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 and its
owners
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 is surf to
internet
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 to eventually discover news about the neighbourhood and what happens in it. With these two ways to acquire information, the new
owners
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 can easily reach their goals. In conclusion, the desire to know the
history
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 of your own
house
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 is always more important for the new
owners
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 and
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 trend is growing up in the world and its importance is linked with security and curiosity and
according to
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me
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 it is very important to know
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