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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.

#people #aim #university #education #graduates #jobs #individuals #society
There is no denying that discipline plays a pivotal role in
the
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shaping the future of the
community
. It has been a topic of debate for many years with some arguing that
culture
 gives opportunities only for individuals to find jobs with high salaries,
while
 others argue that it gives multiple advantages to the whole civilization. In
this
 ,
an
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essay I will consider both sides. It is well established that the incomes of individuals directly depend on the level of their
culture
. If individuals studied
in
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 famous universities
such
 as Oxford and Harvard they are more likely to succeed and will get a prestigious
job
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jobs
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. For ,instance well-known popular successful crowd namely Mark Zuckerberg and Bill Gates graduated from the best universities in the world. ,
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Furthermore
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it is clear that
 giving quality
culture
 to the
community
 has numerous benefits for association too. Many universities strive to teach qualified managers who can create jobs in the future which is beneficial for the crowd. It can help to develop the economy in the country which in turn helps to improve the well-being of the
community
.
Moreover
 educated
community
 can help in the formation of a decent association. For ,example countries which have a good level of
culture
 have strong and steady economies
such
 as the USA and the UK. In conclusion, undoubtedly in university students acquire important skills and abilities which help them forward to get high-paid jobs. Simultaneously it is significantly beneficial for associations because it gives employment opportunities and boosts economic growth.
This
 factor reflects the well-being of the population. ,
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Obviously
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 both
point
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 of
views
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 have their own arguments.
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