International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time,there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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in some places.

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Topic Vocabulary:

enormous benefit
impact
local inhabitants
environment
disadvantages
outweigh
advantages
economic benefits
job creation
cultural exchange
infrastructure development
promotion
local products
environmental impact
exploitation
resources
cultural erosion
increased cost of living
overcrowding
congestion
balancing
benefits
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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time,there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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